Thursday, December 9, 2010

5 Paragraph Essay

Save Trees, No Homework!

Imagine a beautiful rainforest, tons of plant life, exotic animals, and cute baby birds. Now imagine it being cut down. For what? Filthy extra work... Homework! Homework kills so many trees that provide oxegyn! Say you plan on doing something environmentally friendly, but then you remember you have math homework. What ever will you do? Instead of paying attention in class, you were trying to rush through your homework, how terrible! See how horrible homework is?

Visualize yourself in a sublime forest surrounded by gorgeous vegetation and playful creatures. Now pretend it all disappears. When you take away trees from the planet, it becomes close to nothing. No plants, no mammals, no birds, nothing. Would you really like to live in an ugly world like that? No, of course not! Think of the thousands of trees that are cut down, just for homework. Is it not bad enough we've already murdered hundreds of thousands of trees for other uses? One reason I believe homework is bad is because, we already kill tons of trees and the animals in them. Why make it worse?

There are hundreds of things more important and, or, more fun to do than homework; we all know it's true. Personally I'd rather be spending time with family or friends. Sometimes I also engage in after-school activities. Like wise, I believe in amusement time, such as, doing things you enjoy, hanging out with friends, and family, writing, drawing, ETC. It seems taking a break from work helps you think better. Sometimes it is completely needed to take a break from work.There are many things we'd rather spend our time on than homework, we all know it.
 
Getting homework can be a distraction. For example, say you got homework from your previous class and you're worried you might not finish it. What do you do? You finish it in class. Homework can be a total distraction! You'll be sitting in a class focusing on homework from two days ago, and miss any important dates, assignments, due dates, or progress reports. How awful is that? You think if you rush through it, you would get a good grade. But what about courtesy and respect grades in class? I think every person who receives homework wants to get it done quickly, but who knew it could actually make your grade worse. Isn't homework starting to sound cruel? You could miss many important lessons while doing homework in class. We all need to focus on school work, not homework.

Doesn't homework sound awful? It kills hundreds, even thousands of trees, animals, and maybe even people! Isn't it unbelieveable how much harm homework does to the enviorment? Who knows, homework could kill us in the future. Homework could also ruin your social life! Wouldn't it be awful if you had to miss basketball because of homework? Wouldn't it be awful to not know there's a test on Friday because you weren't paying attention in class?  Think of all the cute baby birds and squirrels we could save by not wasting trees on homework! I bet you Superman and Spongebob want you to save trees. They're probably against homework too, and know i bet you can understand why.

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Thursday, October 21, 2010

5 Paragraph Essay Practice

Kariel, The Best Celebrity There Ever Was!
When I grow up I think I'd make a great celebrity. I've always enjoyed pretending I was famous. One of my favorite things to do is hang out with famous people, and act out movies. I even have some experience at singing, acting, and talking about myself. I'm really responsible, I am fashionable, and I am very smart.

Responsibility has always come naturally to me. There was that time when I was left home alone and I cleaned the house. I'm always making sure I do all of my homework. Whenever I am told to do something, I always finish it. Being able to be responsible is the first step to becoming a celebrity.

Being fashionable is another thing I really enjoy. It's so exciting to be complimented on your clothes. When I'm being complimented I feel like I'm amazing. I am to fashion as, what a worm is to an apple. Being able to be fashionable the rest of my life would be amazing and helpful!

Being smart takes a special talent. I gained a lot of experience at reading, writing, and being around smart people. I learned a lot during school like, the ABC's.  For example, I can recite the alphabet in twenty seconds. The time I spent learning the alphabet is sure to give me an advantage when it comes to being a celebrity.

The three most important ingredients required in order to become a successful celebrity are responsibility, being fashionable, being smart, and I've got them all! I want to be famous. I'm never so happy as when I'm in the midst of being a celebrity. It's like Mr. Shoe Shine said "You've got talent!" When I am famous, I will be amazing, and that's why I'll be the best celebrity there ever was!'

I got my Celebrity picture from ; http://www.crazychinesewoman.com/2008/03/


Sunday, October 17, 2010

Book Review : Far North

Far North, by Will Hobbs, is about a boy named Gabe who goes up north to a school in Yellowknife and meets a Dene boy who gets a little home-sick after leaving his town to go to school. He decides to head home and Gabe decides to come along for the ride. Clint (the pilot) decides to take a detour to see the Nahanni River, when their plane battery dies. They throw everything to shore, but forget one important thing. They try to save the plane, but they knew it was going to fall into the water. Clint ends up falling trying to save everything they left behind. Johnny Raven, Gabe, and Raymond end up getting stuck in the woods for the winter. Gabe and Raymond were lucky Johnny Raven was there to teach them how to survive. They end up running into bears and wolverines after Johnny Raven's death. The boys keep trying to get to the village and run into so many difficulties. Finally, after weeks of trying to survive winter, they reach Nahanni Butte and are finally safe.

A few of the main themes in this book is never give up or lose hope, always keep going. An example of this theme is when they both think they're going to die but they try to keep going anyways. Another theme would be to always be prepared for the worst. One example of this theme is how Gabe tries to get across an ice bridge but the bridge ends up slowly breaking and Gabe falls. If Raymond wasn't there he wouldn't have lived. Another example would be that they knew they had to chop lots of wood for a fire before it got too cold outside. Those are just a few of many themes in this book.
 
I would definitely recommend this to other 7th graders, because it is very adventurous and I find it quiet thrilling. I think that anyone would enjoy this book. Sadly there is not a sequel, but I would suggest reading other Will Hobbs' books. I think that I would definetly recommend this book to anyone I know because it is exciting.


I got this image from:
http://www.fantasticfiction.co.uk/h/will-hobbs/far-north.htm